Wednesday, November 4, 2009



As he walks to see what he can buy, my big brother goes with him. I stayed with my mom and dad. Soon after like 5 minutes my big brother comes back with our oldest brother Daniel.
My brother seemed bored in the store. So I decided to tell him something.
“hey do you want to play with me” I had said.
“sure why not” said Alejandro.
“lets play hide and go sick” I said.
“ok” he said.
I ran as fast as possible to the closest thing I can hide in. I see a rack of clothes next to my mom. I went as fast to the bottom of the rack of clothes. Then I hear my brother say “here I come”.
I saw look around him over and over again. Soon he had passed the rack of clothes, I was so happy that he couldn’t find me. I was always thinking in my head that I said to myself
“I think this is the best hiding spot ever “.
After 3 minutes I had felt so bored of me laying on the ground to much. I had felt so bored that I soon felt sleepy and more sleepy. I couldn’t had fallen I sleep that fast because the floor was very rough, hard, and hot. Soon I had fallen to sleep after like 3 minute. Two hours had past and I woke up in my big brothers shoulder. I look up and I turn around and I see my mom and my brother Alejandro. My brother put me down and my mom was so worried that she hold my had tightly. I thought to myself my hand hurts so bad but like always my mad mom said
“you aren’t going to let go of me“.
“ok” I said sadly.
For now on I’m going to look up for you and Alejandro. We soon went back to the van and my brother told me that I got lost. I was like surprised about what he had said. I told him what places you had gone to search for me.
“I had gone to many places to go and look for you” he said
“wow you did this for me” I said.
I had felt so happy of my big brother did for me I could seriously imagine him searching around different places just to fond me and I also felt kind of scared because what if they couldn’t find me.
“of course I’m not just going to leave my little brother to get taken away from another person” he told me.
“thank you for finding me” I said happy.
I was so happy that my face was filled with joy and happiness .
“no problem” he replied.
“next time you get lost I will find you even harder” “ok”, he said.
“ok then” I replied back.
I had relied on him to look for me way harder when I ever get lost in any other store.
I had felt reliable because now he is gonna keep looking out for me and I can like mostly do much other things but also not stupid things too because I can get taken or lost.
This person is my hero because he went threw so much to find me and he did a great job of finding me.

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